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<p></p></P><B>第十二讲 Prediction 6)-10) 评分标准及应试建议<p></p></B></P> 6) A Problem of The Great Upsurge in Learning English<p></p></P> 7) The Rush of Going Abroad<p></p></P> 8) The Rush on Diplomas and Certificates<p></p></P> 9) ON Tax Evasion<p></p></P> 10) Should Private Cars be Encouraged in China?<p></p></P> VI. Standards for Evaluating (写作评分标准)<p></p></P> 2002年硕士研究生入学考试全国统一命题英语试卷作文评分标准<p></p></P> 1. 给分:17-20分<p></p></P> 内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的全部内容:文章通顺,语言流畅,句式变化多样:用词面较宽;虽有个别不妥之处,但写作基本功较好;表达能力较强:长度符合要求。<p></p></P> 2. 给分: 13-16分<p></p></P> 内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的全部内容;表达基本清楚,文字连贯;句式变化较多:结构与用词有少量一般性错误;长度符合要求。<p></p></P> 3. 给分:9-12分<p></p></P> 内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的全部内容;表达基本清楚;但结构与用词错误较多,有少数是严重错误;长度符合要求。<p></p></P> 4. 给分: 5-8分<p></p></P> 内容切题,包括题中所列要点:语句尚可理解,但结构与用词错误多;有些是严重错误:长度基本符合要求。<p></p></P> 5. 给分: 1 - 4分<p></p></P> 与题意勉强有关。但条理不清,不成篇章;语句错误多且严重:词不达意。<p></p></P> 1. Cultures-National and International (18分)<p></p></P> This is a very interesting picture of a lovely American girl dressed in traditional Chinese costume with a sweet smile on her face. She wears a pearl necklace, colorful ribbon, ear rings, and other decorating things that are characteristic of the clothes of a Chinese minority nationality. It is obvious that as a result of our open-door policy, more and more foreigners visit China and become interested in our national culture, which is making it go international.<p></p></P> There is no reason to make a fuss about this phenomenon. With the rapid development of technology and economy, the world is becoming smaller and smaller, and international cultural exchanges have become more and more frequent, which is inevitably improving our mutual understanding and friendship with other countries.<p></p></P> As Chinese citizens, we should respect our own national culture and learn useful things from the cultures of different nations, which will enable us to make great progress in many ways. I believe a happy and bright future is awaiting us if we make every effort to promote cultural development both nationally and internationally.<p></p></P> 2. Cultures National and International (12分)<p></p></P> As seen from the above picture, an American girl in traditional Chinese costume is smiling to us with friendly looking. There are a lot of bright and beautiful accessories on her body. She dresses in Chinese costume, which is a symbol on behalf of the minority people in our country. From the picture we can draw a conclusion that cultures are national and international, and no limit between different countries. Even if growing up in various countries, we have still the same interests in cultures, not only in America, but also other countries.<p></p></P> In my view, it is no exaggeration to say that cultures are the most important factor, which can make the mankind progress and benefit a great deal from the communication in cultures, other than economic development. I am of the opinion that, in reaction to the phenomenon of cultures tending to be national and international, China should hold the key to success in the 21St century both in economy and cultures. We are required by the world people to open our cultures. Only in this situation can China act in cultures as an important role in the world stage. Of course, faced with the entry in foreign cultures, we must take steps to keep up the alertness against bad minds. My argument to the point is that we can’t throw the baby away with the bath water.<p></p></P> 3. Cultures-National and International (16分)<p></p></P> As is shown in this picture, we can see clearly that a charming American girl who is in traditional Chinese costume is smiling to us. The purpose of this picture is that with the development of globalization, great changes have taken place in the world, and one nation’s culture has been accepted by the people from another culture.<p></p></P> Why does this phenomenon appear? I think there are several reasons as follows. First, with policy of opening the door to the outside world being well implemented in China, a large number of people from other countries like to visit China and become interested in traditional Chinese culture. Second, due to the easy and fast communications, the distance between various nations has been shortened, and people can get in touch with each other easily. Therefore, cultures from various nations can be exchanged and different cultures can merge together quickly.<p></p></P> In my opinion, people from different countries should learn and share different cultures. Each culture has its own advantages which might be beneficial to another culture. Besides, there is a trend that globalization is going to be accepted in the whole world. Therefore national cultures should gradually become international.<p></p></P> 4. Cultures-National and International (10分)<p></p></P> From this picture we can see an American girl who was wearing a Chinese costume. This girl may be a foreign student or a traveller. She seems to like this costume very much. This picture shows a common phenomenon in China even in the whole world. The phenomenon is that the culture becomes international. The phenomenon is not only in China but also in many other countries. Many people begin to go to many different countries and learn different national cultures.<p></p></P> As far as I am concerned, I think this phenomenon is good to us. Firstly, we can earn some good cultures from other countries, and also can make our good culture confront the world. The international trend of culture can promote our cultures proceed. Secondly. the cultures become international, which can make more people know our country’. So many people will come to our country to have a jurnal. That can rise our travel economy income. Finally, if the culture becomes international it an contact the people of whole world. That will make the world better.<p></p></P> In a word, the phenomenon of the culture-international can benefit to us. That is a good phenomenon.<p></p></P> 5. Cultures-National and International (8分)<p></p></P> From the picture, we can see that a beautiful American girl is in traditional Chinese costume is smiling, as if she was asking us “Am I like Chinese” and speaking I wish Chinese people happy like me.” Which shows that with the wide pace of globalization, cultures differences are shrinking.<p></p></P> In the past, we are stranged to see a person in other countries’ costume while now we are very familiar with this. The result is brought up by the shrinkage of cultures differences between national and international. With the development of economy, people in all over the world interact deeply. So cultures differences is also shrinking slowly, which attributes to improve the friendship of world people, which helps build a peaceful and stable international environment.<p></p></P> In my opinion, I agree with the interaction of cultures --- national and international, I wish I could see many foreign people in traditional Chinese costume.<p></p></P> 6. Cultures-National and International (6分)<p></p></P> There is an American girl in traditional Chinese costume. She is wearing some beautiful jewls and dressing in a suit of national costume. With a smile at her face, she looks like a angler of Chinese.<p></p></P> The number of people dressing in traditional Chinese costume is creasing all over the world. It’s estimated that about three-fifths of Americans be willing to dressing in traditional Chinese costume. It’s show that the national is not only belong to its country, but also to all the world. So we must spread culture in everywhere in the world, and let other peoples to understand us. Also we introduce other cultures for our us.<p></p></P> For my view, I like all of the national of each country. I believe that I can get many knowledge from these. And then I can earn noermous benefits of it.<p></p></P> 7. Cultures-National and International (4分)<p></p></P> In this picture an American girl in traditional Chinese costume is smiling to me, flower circling her head and Chinese Changming lock in her chest.<p></p></P> Lovely girl and lovely Chinese traditional costume make me think. China has many treasures, traditional costume, traditional culture and so on, In its long history it beared excellent culture, beautiful scene and advanced mind. We have the excellent traditional culture. Today it belongs to us Chinese and it belong to the world. China need world, the world need China.<p></p></P> 8. Cultures National and International (2分)<p></p></P> The American girl who in traditional Chinese costume is very lovely, and she is fit for the clothes. May be somebody would think that she is a Chinese girl.<p></p></P> Any countries has their own national costume, and almost of these costume are very beautiful, perhaps, some of them can be say “project!”<p></p></P> So our cultures went countries, we happy see it. We happy also see their culture in China. So we loved that all.yy2002092502<p></p></P> <p></p></P> |
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